HI I'm Byesion and I will comment about your bird haiku. The sentence 'birds are really fast' is very acurate and isn't wrong because:it has 5 syllables and is about nature. Your second line 'birds can fly for a long time' is also correct for the exact same reason. Your last line is 'birds can make nests quick' is also correct because birds can make nests pretty quick and has 5 syllables. Have a nice day. BYE
HI I'm Byesion and I will comment about your bird haiku. The sentence 'birds are really fast' is very acurate and isn't wrong because:it has 5 syllables and is about nature. Your second line 'birds can fly for a long time' is also correct for the exact same reason. Your last line is 'birds can make nests quick' is also correct because birds can make nests pretty quick and has 5 syllables. Have a nice day. BYE
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